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For this week's TIC TOCC my daughter and I decided to do the timed exercise together. Unfortunately our timing went wrong but I think we both created for approximately 14 minutes.
First up is my nine year old's attempts. As you can see in her beautifully colourful picture the copper kettle reminded her of a Genie's lamp. The tiny writing in the top right hand corner reads (and I apologise in advance. Lol.):
“I need to lose some weight”, says the Genie struggling out of the lamp.
“Yes you do!” Squeaks the shrimp from the top of the lamp.
“Perhaps I’m pregnant,” laughs Genie.
“Mackerel”, says Shrimp, “your burp smells horrible”.
Genie laughs and giggles.
By JW Age 9
My daughter can seem so sweet and then comes out with that but at least she had fun :-) I decided to write. Here is the unedited result: